Delirious Mists…..0609-2k11 Comments
A pagoda reflects accusing fingers at the sea.
As the rafted deck snakes out far to be.
A distant castle floats in the delirious mist.
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It has so powerful visual imagery and stunning metaphors that we see a castle floating in mists.'clings' and 'sings' are rhymes within a line, composed in a masterly way
Absolutely impeccable....this was so gorgeous it seemed more than language and poetry...it was a sea breeze with wooden fingers cutting the azure waves...and I saw (I realise I sound potty) but I saw a castle seeping through the mist...bravo...
just lovely! it makes for easy reading and makes you drift imagining what you wrote
What a nice poem it is, fantastic on a marvelous theme running like a horse in the race a bird is flying in the sky motionless…..the word is the music in the years and the fine tune Created in the poem…which makes the poem a master piece.
I agree with below, well written. Thanks for the comment. Liked the line, 'The calm of the sea belies the hidden storm'. Read mine - Tears - Adeline
Amazing. Beautifully written. Like to read more. Thanks & regards sam
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10/21/2025 2:41:55 AM # 1.0.0
Absolutely beautiful...lovely imagery...truly poetical...Love it!