Delilah, Across The Sunlit Sea Comments

Ever so deeply and powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

'At times she'd kneel and clutch the hardened sand, a wisp of wind might tress her raven hair, her body stroked by dusk's seductive hand then rest beneath the falling midnight air' - loved this imagery, drawn with perfection.

A nice title adds to the beauty of the body of this poem. 'a shadow world where phantom voices sing their words dispersed by weak eternal sighs' - an excellent depiction. '

There's only one thing I can write about this poem: Wow!