Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Delightful Would Comments

Rating: 5.0

Delightful would it be
to me
that I might be the
pollen of rose
...
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Asif Baloch
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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

a heart felt warming poem well penned with passion cheers

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Delightful would it be for me to comment on your beautiful crafted poem Asif. Each stanza is the same length and the imagery you have provided for me, the reader, is glorious. Thank you for this. 10 Karin Anderson

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

a poem filled with great emotions as always Asif! ! ! ! ... I like such ones... we can feel your emotions flowing throw your words! ! 1 10+++ regards shan

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Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

wowwwwww asif such a pure delight to read this so heart tuchhhhhhhhhhhhing --10 anjali

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Such heartfelt and moving poem Asif. You have crafted it so beautifully and it really touched me! 10 Karin Anderson

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Lady Grace 18 June 2009

beauifully composed with words so gentle..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

Poem is delightful but the ending is touchy Asif.10+++

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