Wednesday, December 20, 2017

Delighted Pencil Sketcher Comments

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She slips her hand
Into the art with a wand
She just holds her pencil
The art does simply grow
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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

(cont.) .....some favorite lines: People prefer to stand in queue To simply view Those fine arts of yours/you.....................i like the topic and its handling, and the rhyming. and i like that you didn't seem bound to a rhyme scheme throughout. i think you are new to PH. Welcome! bri :)

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bri edwards 20 February 2018

to MyPoemList. i think the wand is a pencil and the art is poetry. i like it, though a pen or keyboard would do as well. hee-hee Pencils awaits her And papers, all along the way Sounds as if they say.................i suggest: Pencils await and papers..........sound. (to be continued) .....

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