~ Delight Unalloyed ~ Comments

Aha...excellent..bejesus swayed by wordings..Watch Oh....splendid Poet has nicely adapted from RNT... She is maturing in RNT I suppose Though I know it is very difficult to adapt RNT nevertheless her effort is commendable Thanks sharing...Tenner

Much better! This I like...your alliteration here works because you have tied it into your imagery. good one.

Oh my gosh this is really good! ! ! (:

I'm no expert but I know when something is good. Loved it!

As usual good with a message!

This is a very romantic and sensuous verse full of contemplation and philosophy too. I liked the variety presented in the verse 'through flowers'.

Your poem is so passionate, keep it up.

Your poem is so passionate, keep it up.

an invitation to life to dive into divine sea of light this is divine ambrosia this world needs to drink on a sea of love compassion all should embrace be drunk on

A thought -provoking poem. Thnx for sharing.

O you don't stop impressing us! ....very nice indeed i feel delight while reading your poems..... thanks for sharing

Your poem gives me such pleasure with 'Oh You' i e that which my delight derives. Niv, this poem rings piercingly true as it showcases your amazing talent. Love you dear. Hope youre having a good summer...it'shot in New York. I was away a couple weeks

The greatest delight of reading your poems is honesty! Niv, you have proven yourself beyond your own boundaries, to me and the rest of the world! God Bless You! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace...

poem is pure delight

Nice Crystal clear and transparent cascade, thanks for sharing,10+

Nice poem, but maybe you could let the thought develop more. Don't over think it.

Like chant of psalms…from Vedic texts…wondrous adaptation… I endorse views of Alex…he has analyzed very wisely why setting sun not rising sun… mellow feeling …new Joy ever new Joy…by smearing Ocean Ambrosia miniscule if even…become eternal.. 10+++ Dr. V.

Thought provoking...Nice reading..

'Dive in an ocean of ambrosia'.....what a beautiful sentiment

'Deep in an ocean of ambrosia' -what a beautiful sentiment..........10