Confined he was to the greenwood tree
Sky was the roof of his home rent free
To move about was not his spree
Quest for moving yearning for a key!
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I agree with you.........among all modes of travel the train travel is the best.................you made me nostalgic..........Good Write..............
There is something very romantic about trains. I love to hear the whistle of the freight trains echoing in the hills of West Virginia. You bring that nostalgic experience back to me. Ten for your vivid poem. Warm regards, Sandra
unlike a travel through air or water, a train travel gives more opportune and brings one closer to watch learn and enjoy His creations- movable and immovable both...impressive write
very delightful in fact i made a train journey recently after years, and felt this the most delightful experience.you have captured what happens inside and outside very graphically, thanks
Wow! This one is chockablock with information - a fascinating journey on wheels that evokes images only seen before on television. You deliver your account with a perceptive eye and a plethora of enthusiasm. Great piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
What is most striking about this composition is the richness of the imagery used. It quickly took me on a train journey and from my mental window I could see all the wonderful sights described here. It traces the evolution of transport starting with the bullock cart to the aeroplane. But it sings melodies of train travel which is the best form of travel in my opinion, too. Repetition of 'walk', swim' and 'fly' provides a magical touch to the composition. Sleeping well to the lullaby of the train Reading full to fill the gap in the brain Eating, munching kept in store Vendors providing more and more Talking topics all under the sun Giving chance of reply sure to none! Delight indeed is a train travel Grand indeed is the modern marvel! I can relate very well to each of these lines and the humor used in the third last line made me smile. As I read all these lines I felt I was actually in a train enjoying every bit of my journey! Kudos to the poet for such a brilliant write!