Sunday, April 6, 2008

Delicately Spun Comments

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One clematis ascending a trellis,
trying to find somewhere to cling.
Hoping to acquire a strong and firm hold,
ready for the entering spring.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 10 April 2008

I can picture the scene and what a beautiful one too. I loved this poem. Well written. Love Andrew x

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Original Unknown Girl 10 April 2008

What a glorious picture you've painted here Ernestine. I adore clematis, they're so pretty and you've captured it's delicate yet strong nature perfectly. HG: -) xx

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Duncan Wyllie 06 April 2008

Bold, Natural, one of lifes strong Mountaineers, could this be you that your poem so delicately describes Ernestine Eitherway I loved this one all the same, Wondeful Love duncan X

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What a brilliant ending analogy E! I've always been entranced by clematis (erk - what is the plural? !) - this sums them up in one. (Are you gardening today in the snow? ! !) t x

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