Thursday, October 13, 2011
Delicate Thread Comments
Rating: ★2.8
He was laid on broken cot
Very tired after having fought
Ceaselessly waging relentless struggle
To come out happily from troubles
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
14 October 2011
you have woven a delicate thread through out your poem. Life is a delicate thread.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
14 October 2011
. Send message | Gloria Rodikis You mast have had a brave and lovely father! 4 seconds ago via mobile · Like
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Posted By: Hibiscus - on October 14,2011 A very loving and beautiful poem penned with the breath of flowers and singing of birds. God bless and keep you. Fondly... Pat