Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Deliberately Snore Comments

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I believe in calmness
To bring more shine on your face
It compels me to feel more
But when I try to speak” you deliberately snore”
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

I love the way you hunt Make me to feel its brunt I swim in large ocean But you are no where seen........so deeply envisioned. Interesting. Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.....10

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Seema Jayaraman 08 October 2015

Sir, a lil mystiified..so who is the protagonist in this poem? Who snores? Pls enlighten. Thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2015

Manjiri Chowdary likes this. Comments Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Mehta welcome Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Gajanan Mishra 07 October 2015

always tease me and fight, good one sir, namaskar..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2015

I love the way you hunt Make me to feel its brunt I swim in large ocean But you are no where seen

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