Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Delectable Melon … 1010-2k12 Comments

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wearing silky serrated green
or glow smooth hugging sheen

Lovingly pick with much care
From the colorful village fair
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Yasmin Khan 13 May 2013

From describing a glowing melon to committing gladly to ingress, the composition itself is very 'delectable'. It's creating something noteworthy out of ordinary....very well-written

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Ency Bearis 10 October 2012

well versed couplets superb write

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Neela Nath Das 19 September 2012

Hmmm. I also love water melon. Very delicious poem. It added variety to your work.

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

very well written... treat!

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Sun Shine 19 September 2012

delicious and mouth watering poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : (

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Captain Cur 13 September 2012

Wonderfully written and a very poignant description.

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Deep Ali 13 September 2012

Lovely write. a treat indeed!

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Payal Parande 13 September 2012

wow if every fruit can be eaten like this well i guess we can now since we have you. a brilliant poem from a brilliant poet..a fantastic one indeed... thank you for sharing, payal

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