Friday, August 29, 2014

Delay A Day Comments

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Delay a day
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My mother my dear
In jest and in play
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 31 August 2014

the safest place is mothers lap.....beautiful sir...............great

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

A lovely dedication to mother! ! ! I loved the lines.... Oh! My dear mother Delay and delay a day So that I can sleep In your lap of heaven For heaven is far away… Very true said, everyone love the presence of mother with them. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us. Thank you Sir, for many inspiring comments for many of my poems. I am humbled. Thanks a lot.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 August 2014

When sparkles my mother Like a pearly dew dear.. exquisite beauty in this song of devotion to mother. kudos poet.

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Valsa George 30 August 2014

Beautiful and warm sentiments expressed for a mother! Oh! My dear mother Delay and delay a day So that I can sleep In your lap of heaven For heaven is far away A mother's comforting presence is like heaven to any child! Children want their mothers to be with them hale and healthy for ever! A very passionate write!

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