Dejected Desires Comments

I really like this. It sounds extremely meaningful and I love it

Hmmm this one really makes me think The images it sends through gives me a sadness...forceful, , , hmm its as though the woman forced the man not to look back..its just painful but i like the way you put their distance and decison of no turning back...she..the woman is now the mans past- keep writing my friend

thinking about your life., as you pushed me to, do so, never to look back, never to hook back.... good and positive signnot to look back....penned very nicely..i love it read mine o.mother, papa do u know and papa you too.. comment if u like poet