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The Earth crumbled/shivering dangerously - a vivid and beautiful line for a dream-like poem. Well done! !

Great poem and well written. Not more than a dream! Loved it.

Wow. Beautiful poem..I thought it was real till the end..But dream looked so real, the way you portrayed...

WoW! ! Gripping. So glad it was a dream.

Hahahahahaha, thank God it was a dream. But the imagery is wonderful.

I don't think that the writer was dreaming at all.

Thankfully it was just a dream, and not an actual occurrence. And so, everyone and everything was spared. A good poem.

Very well said and ecstatic write Sir

Really good... Amazing....... i salute you sir...

very nice pen love the imagery

Really amazing, great poetry hats off 2 u sir..

Good write. The beauty of architecture and happy living with the vision of a cataclysmic event. Very strong contrast. Reality as a dream or a dream as reality? . It asks the question.

Very vivid imagination in a dream state. Seems so real hard to tell the difference between dream and reality. Well crafted.

Not more than a dream! good write and you give equity to your poem

The fury of the nature n its devastating effects well presented. It may invite other interpretations too, in addition.

A surreal experience.......

Sounds like you are describing an earthquake.

Everything old is new again and so often factors of history repeat with beige rant and despotic leaders or mismanagement of the land and our environment, is it getting hotter? Nicely descriptive.

kool and reasonable. kip it up