Sunday, January 25, 2009

Deja Vu Comments

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Don’t get me started nor take this lightly,
Lest you see my lightning flash,
I feel energized like a quiver,
Darting and flying, striking and shrinking,
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Isaac 'slimx'
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Benjamin Feliciano 25 January 2009

I've read a couple of the other ones, but so far this is my favorite. Your poetry doesn't just fill in space, every line has something to say. Its very dense writing. Good job

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