Deja Vu Comments

Nice form! Nice theme! Nice poem :)

Good idea on the form and the visual effect.....much more to do in that formula...explore it in the future

My 10 for this coz it is a poem with a different form. Love it.

Very perceptive.I gave you a ten.Good direct composition.

You've woven a net of splendid deja vu.You've a unique style too.Thank you for sharing such wonderful verses

What a fascinating construction! This and your poem about pregnancy - so visual! You inspire me to experiment for myself with shape poems. Fascinating ideas, too.

Intriging. Wouldn't it be amazing to physically see our older selves directly in front of us?

I've recently decided that I was Humphrey Bogart in my previous life, and was re-incarnated only without the money, fame, looks, and class...Humphrey must have done something awful to be punished thus...really clever write O...very thought provoking...Coach

I've often pronounced / translated Deja VU as 'DAYS of You'... illusionary yet repeatable experiences expressed...oh so Onely.... right here... On ya! ! !

whoa, id be scared if i saw an older man who resembled me...deja vu is a funny thing, it makes you wonder, past lives possibly?

There is a sense of déjà vu in my adding comments to this poem again. But then, as poets, we live our lives - so to speak - in a form of reverse. The imagery here is unavoidably incisive. Rgds, Ivan

As imaginitive as always, One. Perhaps you have been cloned and somewhere there is someone writing equally striking poems. I doubt it. there is only one One. Fx

That imagine came from the past because not the mirror but an interior voice told it. That voice that took our dear Onelia to the way of the experimental style. And now where is it taking her?

Wow! This is a fantastic poem and so well done. Beautiful and touching. Love the way you have set it out so the dots become the intervals between footsteps and thoughts and suggest the dislocation encountered in the encounter. You handled it so well and this is one of your most accomplished poems. I award you the highest accolade I can...I am jealous and wish that I had wrote it. Powerful poem...powerful! One of the most wonderful ones you have done. A bravo poem. I bow to your power and realise I am not worthy. love Donall Donall

Oh wow, this is very clever! I love the way you've placed your words, it works to perfection. And I am a great believer in reincarnation so this is top in my book... Brilliant! HG: -) xx

and she to you a 'deja vu' going into your future onelea? this mine, not provoking...honest! a write impressively enjoyable...

The idea of seeing ones 'copypasted' onto anothers as ones own future is a brilliantly expressed one.... and those last two provoking lines are the icing on the poetic cake. Fab. t x