Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Deity's Insane Plaything Comments

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The dark grew light
The light grew dim
Stark and white
The world of whim
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Violet Llewellyn
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Book Worm 19 January 2007

i predict that you will become a great poet, you have great talent and your writing is new.

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Jim Foulk 16 January 2007

very dark poem, but well written, and so different.

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