Friday, May 14, 2010

Deities Of Destiny Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’ve spent so much time
Trying to catch a lonely dream
And visiting flower markets;
I’ve sat in the moonlight
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Uriah Hamilton
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fleur de lys 25 May 2010

You've got some lovely imagery happening here and I love the delicate romance of the visions you've conjure up: 'On summer nights When the breeze is swaying The lilac trees, The promises and sacred oaths I’ve made While dancing to the radio and flickering candlelight' .

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