Friday, November 7, 2008

Defying The Devil. Comments

Rating: 5.0

How dare we defy the One who holds sway
Over malleable minds, who disgorges
Time and again the weak, as dispensible?
Only the strong will prevail, so they say.
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Fay Slimm
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Tsira Goge 05 June 2009

To defend the conquering by hate, as 'right', Than, by gently lifting love to the fore We can welcome, once and for all, true peace Which will soon take root and cover the earth. .................................................................. Fay, Graceful ending and in general, excellent a poem...10... All kind, Tsira

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Martin Swords 29 November 2008

Fay.... Complicated this one. Outcomes are written by the winners, as are the rules, retrospectivly, to justify the results. The meek and mild can win in the long run though it may take forever, but then we've got forever Fay. Poem might be a little long, point might be made a little clearer, sooner. But then.........we've all got our own way of walking. Thank you Martin

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Ivor Hogg 20 November 2008

I applaud your message of hope. I belive in an omipotent power the creator But cannot grasp the cincept of the devil for the devil to exist woud deny the omnipotence of the creator. Man has free will and it is mans choice to act as he sees fit wickedly or with good intent.

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Kris Smith 07 November 2008

Living proof ageless one the pen is mightier than the sword, if everyone whispered love it would drown evils taunts Chris 10 for being priceless ageless

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