Tuesday, January 10, 2006

Defying Gravity (Amongst Other Things) Comments

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It’s quite a simple thing to do
just between gravity
And you.
Natural laws are binding?
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Bill Mitton
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***** ********* 10 January 2006

I like the flow of this little poem Bill, those line breaks really work well! 10 from theres the brakes, pull them on! or break the chains and float huh? Great lines. Tai

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Jeremiah Shine 10 January 2006

I like this one, bill! nice beat.

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Bill Mitton

Bill Mitton

Salford, England
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