Defused Dacoity Comments

I'm sorry I don't quite understand what the poem's about but whatever it's about it's a great poem as you can feel a different emotion in each line. well done! !

I'm sorry I don't quite understand what the poem's about but whatever it's about it's a great poem as you can feel a different emotion in each line. well done! !

i love ur poem nice word choice.

YOUR POEM PAINTS A VIVID PICTURE I CAN ACTUALLY VISUALIZE THESE EVENTS TAKING PLACE

nice imagery, its fantastic

Great poem, great write, great flow

Your poem seems to have alot of personal emotions about a certain place in life it speaks like it has sorry and upset but also knows how to look past very emotional but good in discription

You have written a very lovely poem. Your poem depicted terror of men against men. Keep it up.

wow. wonderful. great

superb description of the event, i like it

well described and well pictured poem i like it.

while reading this, i could see the visuals in my mind......good work

Very descriptive, a problem the world over. But worse where poverty and low socioeconomic status predominate.

Wonderful thought and satire

n yea...plz do read my poem pain of heart...

very well written....i can visualize the whole incident....keep writing.. :)

very graphic poem, tells the story well!

Your poem portrays a frightening experience in a very graphic way. I hope that you are unharmed physically, emotionallly or spiritually

this poem seems to be the narration of a true incident. but the question is that whether there is a situation for a shoot out? it is true that the dacoits have committed a serious crime. but they didn't injured even a single person. the police man who took participated in the operation was also not injured. we should not praise the fake encounters. In every society there will be crime and punishment.but it should be dealt according to the law of the land. we should respect our constitution. and the law of the land should also be respected. if it is a fake encounter, that is far away from the real democracy.

This thread visually describes the three times/stages of that terrible event. From that quiet Saturday afternoon to the suddenly unexpected agitation from money looters until policemen intervened so as to wiping away countrymen fears... Good luck!