Deformed Rose Comments
I cover in the murky cleft
Like an ugly owlet
Frightened by the neighing
Steeds of sun, that foraged
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the last stranza is superb. efficiency is displayed
...'Quandaries mushroom on The mossy floor infected By virus of doubts cultivated In darkness of my mind Dispelled of sunlight, Confiscated off the basic Aeration of positive beliefs'... this beautiful para is the essence of this 'deformed rose' write...well done, Seema 10
a marvellous write and very strong use of metaphor....i luvd it the whole poem is superb but these lines are and will be remembered for my entire life.... ' Insanely enough my feelings Plunge to untimely death Crashing on the boulders Of toughening fortune, Dumping my broken heart To wail in unbounded grief Like a parted mourning dove ' bravo bravo 10+++++++++++++ nad A+++ for this tremendously good piece of art and added straigtt to my favs.list....thanks for sharing it... rgds asif
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8/5/2025 1:43:48 AM # 1.0.0
love your emotions, life is just the feelings a heart posesses. very nice