Thursday, February 16, 2017

Definition Of Love Comments

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The berry may look blacker,
The juice may taste sweeter
The root may go deeper,
But your love is always a ladder
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2017

your love is always a ladder That I climb to reach the tower Cry me a river, cry me an ocean stir up emotion Now, I need a heart to borrow Heart and soul take, Tis not love when ye forgives not…. You end the poem with a highly positve note of forgiving. That is your message. These are the points which i collected from your poem after reading it carefully.. Thank you very much for this poem It shows the brilliance of your mind. tony

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Icetee Junior 09 September 2017

Thank u Dr. Tony...I may as well check up your brilliant poems.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 July 2017

Nicely written love poem. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Icetee Junior 09 September 2017

Thank u Jazib Kamalvi, I truly appreciate you commenting on my poem.

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Icetee Junior 09 September 2017

Thank u Jazib Kamalvi, I truly appreciate u commenting on my poem.

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