Friday, May 4, 2018

Definitely, Zero Degrees Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take my hand
I'm slowly falling,
Promised land?
No longer calling
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Sandra Feldman
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Kelly Kurt 04 May 2018

Poetry is good therapy : -0 (Definitely)

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Susan Williams 04 May 2018

I hope this poem has no basis in your personal life because this poem is on fire with agony. Love falling apart is one of the most tragic experiences in a human's lifetime and takes a long time getting to the other side. 10+++++++ as a poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 May 2018

Dear Sandra, such a well crafted poem....10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 04 May 2018

Sandra, reality is cold but that's where we all should be.

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