Thursday, March 30, 2006

Defiant Me Comments

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They called the heavens
It poured instead
It was to help me, they said
My heart turned as black as the ravens
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Jerry Hughes 07 October 2008

Interesting concept but you could have explained who (they) were. Its a tad ambiguous if you don't mind me saying so. Warmly, Jerry

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