Friday, May 15, 2020

Defiant Blue Comments

Rating: 4.8

It was completely azure blue in the morning,
With flowery petals of white scattered everywhere,
Then the white petals mischievously covered the blue,
Playing hide-and -seek with rainbow colours.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

'My day is complete even though I didn't see the sun! ' - The poem wouldn't be complete without this beautiful line! A nice poem! The caption is nice too.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 May 2020

beautiful poem penned//10+ the nature cares the day like a mother with full pleasure and peace speeding inside heart the nature with full effective color dyes the gloomy realm of heart and makes it enjoyable till ending its time

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How beautiful is your poem! " the nature with full effective color dyes the gloomy realm of heart " - superb expression! Thank you, I am honoured.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2020

A well written wonderful poem...10++

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I am so glad to share my poem with you and all other poetry-lovers at PH. Thanks for the lovely comment, and generous rating.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 May 2020

A beautiful poem on the morning scene when the sky looks blue and flowers begin to bloom and dance with the touch of cool wind. 'The blue is not going to be defeated, and overshadowed, It's coming back with a pretty little smile, My day is complete even though I didn't see the sun! '...is so nice. Enjoyed the poem thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

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I am touched with your lovely comments. So glad that you enjoyed my poem on Spring. Thank you so much.

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