Defiance Comments

" Catch her and hold her if you can" ... If you can't you are not a man. Well written. I like it very much

" Girls and time will never return Once gone, they are forever lost." Great conclusion. A pleasure to read.

" Once gone, they are forever lost. In vain your knuckles knock your brow, In vain will you remember how Like a slim brook the gamesome maid Sparkled, and ran into the shade. " Beautifully composed..