Friday, April 25, 2008

Defenses Of Your Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

How do I slip through the defenses that suround you,
How can I get to know you if you never let me through?
How do I get close to someone whos is so intent on keeping me out,
I ask these questions all day long and fear I will never figure them out
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Tyrone Wingfield
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Saane Pahulu 18 August 2009

Whoa taht was BEAUTIFUL, passionate definitly intense and refreshing as the others said> its really deep coz it kind of reminds me of me! ! if you get wat i mean! ! ! 10/10 for sure.

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Patrick A. Martin 16 August 2009

Great write very intense in the questioning from start to finish.

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Evaughn Gray 21 June 2008

wow that was very powerful..i loved it truly it was beautiful..~Love, Eva

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