Thursday, May 22, 2014

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it eddies and swirls
drawing my gaze
into its tranquil depths
I fear it
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Rain Gill
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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Great piece! Can envision the whole poem playing out in the mind! Nicely done!

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