Defeat (Haiku) Comments

I was worried that this was what you were saying here, Herbert. Fight on. A dark, harrowing poem. G.

Thanks, Duncan. It is the expression of what should never have to be expressed. A mother who will walk with the criminal out of utter convenience. Best H

Something very deep about this one Herbert, Was this to be a mothers defeat at the loss of her own power or a sons even deeper feeling of defeat at the feelings of loss for her A overpowering father perhaps Eitherway it carries a very deep emotional basis Love Duncan X