Anger bestowed upon self
Is weight upon soul
If you cannot walk with rocks tied onto your feet
Why then would you put so much weight onto your soul
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David: Cannot read without the analytic eye of the poetry teacher. Yet it did come out with merits to commend it. Try mine - Anger's Friend Adeline
Anger is an 'arch enemy' to the human soul. One must defeat anger, or he will be defeated by it. Serious advice. A great poem with depths of meaning.10+ Please. continue to share your wonderful gift.
Mr. Beckham: This is good. I like it. Anger seizes the mind though. One cannot let go of it, because it is the one that has hold. And that is when it can seethe. It is a circle that is difficult (some say impossible) to break. Thank you for providing this thought-provoking piece. -G
‘If you cannot walk with rocks tied onto your feet Why then would you put so much weight onto your soul’ ~ Yeah burden laden soul may misguide you = mistake and it is perpetual ‘Get those rocks off your feet Lift up those veil off your eyes’ ~ Clarity of thought …is obscured by anger …excellent poetry you’ve distilled out from your feeling heart and enjoying… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 .
Anger always gets to me and this poem attacks me, tells me I need to control it better than I have been doing. The world needs more writes like this!
anger, and the inability to forgive, are chains we place on our own hearts... well written poem!