Monday, June 17, 2019

Defeat Comments

Rating: 5.0

You hear moans behind her bedroom door,
You don't want it to be true-
But we've both been here before.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2019

This is a brilliant poem on love, depression and sadnesss having touching expression and nice collocation. The last stanza is much impressive. Thanks for sharing.10

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C F 17 June 2019

The sadness coming from this poem is very palpable...! you draw your reader into your sorrow. Well done Bryony.10+

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