Defeat Comments

(cont.) .....AND: I'll steal a bit of love here and there, As for Defeat..... it can go to! ................you gave me a little chuckle at the ending. SUPERB poem. Thanks! bri :)

some favorite lines: The rivers freeze, then the rivers flow, All that remains unchanged are these tears ................to MyPoemList already. & But has closed the gates to Paradise! .............How DARE She! ! ! ? ? ? ? & Might he then bid me enter His Garden? Or, like a bug, spike me with a pin? ..................but you're getting yourself into MORE trouble by not using He! ! ! (to be continued) ....

i've not read the poem; i did, however, read Lyn's comment, and i say: 'use logic to prove that there is always...someone worse off '. you CAN'T! ! it is not logical, but i may volunteer be the ultimate example of altruism and make myself the most worse off of all. ok? any arguments? ! there had better NOT be! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :) (to be continued) ....

I too have spent my days being knocked down. But something has taught me to never give up the fight. My Mother always said there is someone worse off than yourself. True, there is! . Also it is great to dream. Thank you for your words and your honesty. Heartfelt. Keep building your castles. I am so pleased to have read your poem.