Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Defeat Comments

Rating: 3.5

Why did
I not consider
your feelings
god apparent to me?
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Ray Schreiber 18 February 2012

Spare me some comfort. Hurt me. What an ending... love it!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 June 2019

Thanks for your interest. Much appreciated. Sall.

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Valerie Dohren 18 February 2012

Great poem Sally - a good read.

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Sally P. P. 22 August 2019

Hi Val, thanks for your remark. Much appreciated. Sally

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Craig Anderson 09 February 2012

Strike with cutlass and wound the air... Breathtaking prose Sally. It seemed very Dickensian to me. Excellent piece. Regards. Craig.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 February 2012

deep meaningful poem////

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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