Wednesday, October 14, 2020

Deer Morning Comments

Rating: 4.0

I could feel the dew caressing my sides
As I chewed merrily upon an unopened dandelion.
It was pitch black in the valley below
But blackness gave way to a grey sky the other way
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Paul T P Burne
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Terry Craddock 30 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Suspended Night Woods Safety Dawn Wakes', inspired by the poem 'Deer Morning', by the poet Paul T P Burne and dedicated to the poet Paul T P Burne.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 20 October 2020

The poem is a nice experience In the pulse of a deer, experimental

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Terry Craddock 18 October 2020

A beautiful poem embracing nature and the dawn of a new day, a poem of nature and senses with elements of a dream fantasy; a collection of experiences in nature spun into a meditative reality, a nature of desired nurturing comfort, ending in a warm vanishing ' into the safety of the woods'.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2020

A beautiful poem. The superb imagery of this write made me at close range with this wonderful animal. Well crafted and conveyed.

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