Deer Encounter Comments

Connecting with nature and one of its most beautiful wild creature is quite an expereience.Deer are so graceful.A ten, again.

What a beautiful encounter you portray in this softly flowing poem. Not sure about the 'grunt' word near the end, it seemed to make it falter. Freeform is whatever way you want to make it. enjambing is fun sometimes, but the key is in the gracefulness of the pace of the poem, depending on what you want to achieve. firing lines, swimming lines, sauntering lines, it's all in the swing of the hips and the pen. Smiling at you, TAi