Saturday, October 18, 2008

Deeply Lost And Unloved Comments

Rating: 4.6

She is helpless and cannot put up a fight,
She's too weak and small
No one hears her cries in the dead of night
No one, no one, so down she'll fall
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Samantha Young
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Emily Wallace 17 February 2010

wow that poem is brilliant

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Mona Martinez 15 May 2009

wow. that was a sad poem. i enjoyed reading it though. :)

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Mara Lemara 27 April 2009

a touchig poem samantha but may be she is just a very sensitive girl who needs some one to understand gher as all kids pass in that stage, and sure she is beautiful..i passed that stage but other were telling iam a very beautiful girl..so sure she is a marvelous girl but what she neds is some one to build her instead of that distruction which they cause

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Zachary Clark 10 March 2009

A favorite I love this poem! Holy cow this is a perfect emblem of a homeless girl.

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Trinidad Villafranca 06 January 2009

like OMG this one says so much! ! in so many ways

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Rikku Finry 26 December 2008

This one is nice! I like it a lot. :)

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