Saturday, December 16, 2006

Deeply Amused Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Feel the passion,
surrender deep...
Muse will find you,
wake or sleep.
...
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Janet K. Rauch
Muse surrender
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Esther Leclerc 20 December 2006

The short line construction serves this piece very well; wonderful rhymes and phrasing - lots to love here. Esther : ]

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Chuck Audette 17 December 2006

I like the symmetry of the return to the first four lines for the ending, and the effortless flow of the rhymes.. -chuck

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Janet K. Rauch

Janet K. Rauch

Flint, Michigan
Janet K. Rauch
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Flint, Michigan
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