Sunday, July 5, 2009

Deepest Depression (Revised) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Staring at the walls...at the pictures that hang there
each photo...of it all
each step of our relationship..that started, with lust, wanting and care
the last picture that is hung
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Ana Pineda 30 January 2018

i would really want to know why there isn't any performance based on this poem. it is a really great poem! i want to perform it but am not so sure of the tune u placed to it. for a person not so depressed it is hard to see where they need to change their voice. it would be really good if you read it out the way you felt when writing the poem.

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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

isnt it strange how the tiniest things after a break-up can put you in a semi depression

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Deja B'williams 28 November 2009

really luv this poem

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

The deepest depression really relates to the sentiments expressed in this nice descriptive and very sad lyric poem...touching...10+++++++

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Something Special 14 August 2009

so well written and expessed i felt the depression....excellent

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