Monday, November 20, 2017

Deeper Into Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dive deeper
Deeper I dive
Down into the silence
So I can hear my thoughts tonight
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Dawn Novus
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 June 2018

Hi Dawn, Lovely, profound write.. Deeper I dive Down into the silence So I can hear my thoughts tonight.... Yes, it is important to listen to one’s own thought, mind, heart... And keeping away from the cacophony around you is a must...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2017

Deeper I dive Deeper into you Blue -Scintillation poetic imagination capturing the deep divine silence of the sea settling place! Wonderful poem! I would invite you to read my poem 'Sparrow's Orchestra'. For your poem I rate 10/10

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 November 2017

Blues! ! ! Love and dreams! Deeper into you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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