James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Saturday, August 15, 2009

Deep Within You Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep within you dream;
and how you spent your days-
kept gone and others none to have.
With night you come and ride away.
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James McLain
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Ken E Hall 18 February 2010

that place that is no more- and you within this dream I found...very dreamy indeed like eyes in a picture you cannot stop looking at, well done thinking poem ++++=10 regards

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Patti Masterman 18 September 2009

Really like this poem; seems like pure iip all condensed; many poems into a single one..(smile)

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Brianna Cruz 21 August 2009

that poem really stuck to me. i dont noe why but it did. its very...sweet and its too incredible for words =)

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 August 2009

sweet, lovely and captivating.. romantic title... I love this... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Inner Whispers 16 August 2009

hmn...dream within her dream, your dream is awakened from within...short verses, meaningfully weaven...Good morning! (here)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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