Deep Within These Brown Eyes Comments

i liked the poem and i hope that you wont feel that way anymore.

I like the poem and hope that the sadness leaves you if it is real but the poem is great i give it a 10

I think brown eyes are the most beautiful. My husband and 2 out of my 3 kids have brown eyes....(lucky them!) I've thought about writing about the depths of their eyes but never have. I enjoyed your poem Jennifer. Hopefully the sadness expressed here is not true for you. Sincerely, Mary