Friday, August 29, 2008

Deep Within Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today, I want to ask myself
What is it, that makes me weak?
It is a monotonous day round
Or the fear I abound,
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Dr. Yogesh Sharma
COMMENTS
Chetna Tyagi 28 May 2009

really cute......cant say anything else, its just cute

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impressive poem.... nice flow and rhymes... 10 thanks for sharing

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Vidi Writes 26 April 2009

A very familiar anxiety of a young mind Very well depicted within the frame of words Its really rare to look within at this age Consolation that comes from within is a great healer No other medicine has that much power. Nicely you have shared the thoughts deep within. Thanks for this good read.

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Subroto Chatterjee 23 April 2009

Priya, Some human frailties are common amongst us....and covers everyone, young and the very old (like me) .So relax, this feeling too shall pass. God bless. Cheers. Subroto

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Reshma Ramesh 23 April 2009

very well penned.............i think...week in the starting should spell as weak..........

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Mariam Khan 14 April 2009

Realy good poem Thanks for sharing

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Koyel Mitra 09 September 2008

Nice poem.Liked it.A 10 for you.

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