Friday, December 9, 2005

Deep Waters Comments

Rating: 4.5

The nakedness of your body
Warms my soul and sends
My heart on a spinning cycle
Of fury and turmoil.
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Carlos Rodriguez
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Tania S 31 December 2005

You've managed to capture the magic of surrendering to passion in this poem

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Charles Chaim Wax 09 December 2005

passion never ceases and we all must submerge within its trembling being for without delight the earth is but a vast coffin a great poem

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