Thursday, July 9, 2009

Deep Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

i sink deep into a pool of water my eyes blink unnaturally
i jerk up no air
face hot
sounds unheard
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mystery writer
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Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2011

A well penned and poignant write! You got what it takes to make it in the poetry world, talent! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Obinna Eruchie 15 October 2009

This is a fascinating piece, 'deep water'.

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~ Jon London ~ 09 July 2009

you are a very gifted writer....I love the imagery you have painted with select verse...well penned..............keep exploring

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