i sink deep into a pool of water my eyes blink unnaturally
i jerk up no air
face hot
sounds unheard
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you are a very gifted writer....I love the imagery you have painted with select verse...well penned..............keep exploring
A well penned and poignant write! You got what it takes to make it in the poetry world, talent! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...