Thursday, July 9, 2009
Deep Water Comments
Rating: ★5.0
i sink deep into a pool of water my eyes blink unnaturally
i jerk up no air
face hot
sounds unheard
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mystery writer
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~ Jon London ~
09 July 2009
you are a very gifted writer....I love the imagery you have painted with select verse...well penned..............keep exploring
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7/26/2025 8:43:05 AM # 1.0.0
A well penned and poignant write! You got what it takes to make it in the poetry world, talent! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...