Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Deep Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see what i see
Something, longing to see
Perfection perfected by
The power of mine
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Sunny Rose
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

All that was my pitiful fantasy! Nice piece of work.

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Kelvin Owusu 06 September 2012

you really are a terrific writer keep it up

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Eindaray Kyaw 06 September 2012

Deep water.....deep idea.....deep writing style! ! Great

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Sagar Shelar 05 September 2012

Hats - off dear. Keep it up.

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Sunny Rose 04 September 2012

Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments i will do my best to please you

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Alexandria Angel 04 September 2012

Wow those words felt like it came real deep. I love it :)

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