Deep State Comments

It seems, at least in one way, Pakistan is 'lucky'! supper time; gotta go, my friend. bri :)

A well crafted poem. Truly magnificent.5 stars*****

A poem of great depth. Incisive thoughts that are thought provoking. " Democracy couldn't stand up it still crawls." Brilliant line from a great poem. Yes, there is no freedom if democracy still crawls. Top Marks! To my Poem List.

Lovely poem. Yah its not about Pakistan. Ummm....one good thing about Covid is that its making us realise that we are all vulnerable Fellow Humans. I hope this realisation will endure long after the pandemic. One people one race one destiny in a variety of beautiful colours. Great poem Sir.

A perceptive write sir! Democracy crawls..keen observation! Liked it. Top 🌟

its so nice to see sir ye poetically speak glad you r back within 500 hope they will keep u in as long as long as long to ppme ph could belong belong belong ding dong

A beautiful thought provoking behavior. Thank-you sir. Inside everything invisible and deep, Democracy couldn't stand up it still crawls.... very well concieved and said democracy in illusion actually never expressed. It's only when you know each other No, it's not about Pakistan, Here we have driven away Satan, ....in view of hot and chillers it's actually abut driving out Satan. Very well penned sir.

Thanks sir, beautifully you have written

i like the irony, Akhtar Jawad