Monday, June 17, 2013

Deep Solitude Comments

Rating: 4.8

there, thou art leaf, mine

concealed in blue
amid in distances
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Poetheart Morgan
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Ramesh Rai 30 June 2013

upto some extent i agree with soul but once created is always final. if attrmpt is made there must b deviation. good write.xlent

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James Mclain 22 June 2013

Speaking for me. Solitude produces sound verse, such is thee.....iip

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Unwritten Soul 22 June 2013

What a gorgeous write! if i could write for it as for myself here is what i may do..not good as you So do i in its whispers In between spirit and soul Hanging in between surreal dreams While sea hold my feet to drown there Still the sand lock my movement to stand here Solitude, it is you and inside of me _Unwritten Soul

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Sallam Yassin 21 June 2013

oh so deep and so artistic in her shape this piece of an art of leaf and Rose in their solitude/ thanks

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David Wood 20 June 2013

Here less is more a brief delicate flower of a poem. Beautiful.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 June 2013

nice and calm one. we are going on a trip near the sea, and this poem just fit me well done

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