Sunday, February 4, 2018

Deep Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

She counts sheep.
And then falls into a deep sleep.
He wakes her up for a midnight talk.
He just wants to share his thoughts.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

A beautiful poem with amusing expression. Dear Cole you have inscribed this poem nicely and cutely. thanks for sharing.10

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Haha so sweet....thoughts are to be shared when awake, poor girl still responded to him.

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Practicing Poetess 04 February 2018

They need to both work the same time shift! A cute poem of real life.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 February 2018

Lamar, such a good write...10++¥

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