Wednesday, December 26, 2018

Deep Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's all alone in deep silence,
Sitting in front of the blue sea;
Thinking of times that pass her by
Under the tall coconut tree.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Valsa George 21 September 2020

Sitting by the side of a sea and watching the lovely scenes in perfect solitude is indeed so joyful and calming! The salubrious breeze, the fish that leap and glide, the birds in the air.... all create such a lovely ambiance. A lovely poem and an apt image! 5 stars!

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Cheryl Tutaan 12 January 2019

Wow! ! ! I'm amazed by this perfect quatrain, dear Bernard......10+++++++++++

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Jennifer Birchall 27 December 2018

Beautiful imagery created in this wonderful poem Bernard.

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Lamar Cole 26 December 2018

This is a very wonderful and a very enjoyable poem to read.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 December 2018

Thank you, Lamar for the words of inspiration......................

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M Asim Nehal 26 December 2018

Indeed it is the deep silence that provides us calmness and peace, A nice poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 December 2018

Such remark is precise, Mohammed.................. Thanks.......

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Practicing Poetess 26 December 2018

A departure from your usual acrostic. Lovely quatrain; Very much enjoyed!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 December 2018

Thanks for the lovely comment..................................

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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