Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Deep Shadows! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep in the candor of a foolish heart
the flame of your soul does ignite
deep in the hollow of my essence
I have learned of your luminous light
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Geoff Warden
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Deanna More 30 January 2007

Pristine thoughts... flood the mind, surging like a Water Fall from the first line! I truly enjoyed this poem.(A 10 for you!) Deanna xx .

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Duncan Wyllie 04 June 2006

Beautiful, a door and an opening, what a wonderful thought, light lies behind, Love duncan x

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SIR G....GOOD NEWS IZ THAT I LIKE THIS PIECE FROM IT'S METERIND & TIGHT CONSTRUCTION DOWN TO IT'S STELLAR IMAGHERY.............. THE BAD NEWS IS THAT IN SUBMITTING THIS POEM, YOU MUST HAVE CLOSED OFF YOUR USER RATING METER...GO BACK TO ''EDIT YOUR POEMS'' & YOUWILL SEE WHAT I MEAN AT THE BOTTOM OF SCREEN...TELL TRACEY SHE HAS THE SAME SITUATION ON 1 OF HER POEMS (I THINK THE 1 ON YOU OR HERSELF) SHE'LL FIND IT...LET ME KNOW WHEN ALL IS DONE & I'LL JOURNEY BACK OVER TO BOTH SITES & GIV YA YIR JUS' REWARDZZZ! '''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Patricia Gale 23 May 2006

Deep love and thinking in this one Geoff. WELL DONE! Patricia

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

London Ontario Canada
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