Deep in the candor of a foolish heart
the flame of your soul does ignite
deep in the hollow of my essence
I have learned of your luminous light
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Beautiful, a door and an opening, what a wonderful thought, light lies behind, Love duncan x
SIR G....GOOD NEWS IZ THAT I LIKE THIS PIECE FROM IT'S METERIND & TIGHT CONSTRUCTION DOWN TO IT'S STELLAR IMAGHERY.............. THE BAD NEWS IS THAT IN SUBMITTING THIS POEM, YOU MUST HAVE CLOSED OFF YOUR USER RATING METER...GO BACK TO ''EDIT YOUR POEMS'' & YOUWILL SEE WHAT I MEAN AT THE BOTTOM OF SCREEN...TELL TRACEY SHE HAS THE SAME SITUATION ON 1 OF HER POEMS (I THINK THE 1 ON YOU OR HERSELF) SHE'LL FIND IT...LET ME KNOW WHEN ALL IS DONE & I'LL JOURNEY BACK OVER TO BOTH SITES & GIV YA YIR JUS' REWARDZZZ! '''''''''''''''''''FRANK
Pristine thoughts... flood the mind, surging like a Water Fall from the first line! I truly enjoyed this poem.(A 10 for you!) Deanna xx .